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When was it painted?

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At least one source says Murray created the painting in 2010 - [1]. The infobox says 2012 but doesn't have a cite for it. Roger (talk) 20:11, 24 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Suggest the infobox change accordingly, as I can't find any cites for it being 2012 --Stuart Steedman (talk) 11:03, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The "Comparisons" section

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Not sure if this section is relevant to the article. Should it have its own page and be referenced, rather? I don't see it as being core to The Spear. Thoughts? --Stuart Steedman (talk) 11:32, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Please change this section heading to English. This is the English Wikipedia all content must be in English - except direct quotes in limited circumstances or discussions about other languages as such. Roger (talk) 18:21, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I believe Sssteedman is referring to the "comparisons" section, which he renamed into English a few hours ago. Khazar2 (talk) 18:41, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, I've now done the same to this section's heading. To reply to Sssteedman's original question (now that I know what it is about); I believe this section is relevant to this article given the fact that various reliable sources are making the comparisons. It could do with a bit more detail about the media attention it has received as a consequence of the controvery about The Spear. Roger (talk) 18:52, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Makes sense to me, but I'd like to get some more of those sources in there, then; right now we've only got one. Khazar2 (talk) 18:54, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

ANC Lawyer's Waterworks

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The first day of the court case by the ANC had to be postponed because of the crybaby ANC lawyer. Should be in the legal section. 72.228.189.184 (talk) 21:00, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Can you give a source? Khazar2 (talk) 21:16, 25 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Suppose you're serious, it's hardly difficult to find, e.g. google "ANC crying zuma", e.g. this or whichever outlet, bbc whatever. 72.228.189.184 (talk) 01:36, 26 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Too newsy?

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Not sure if this is a valid concern, so perhaps more senior Wikipedians can weigh in, however, I'm concerned that the article's tone is reading too much like a newspaper article, rather than an encyclopaedic one. Most sections in the article are dominated by direct quotes by the various players, which gives this a distinct newspapery feel about it.

Is this a legit concern? Should I look at doing a tidy-up, or is this okay given the newsworthiness of the article in any case?

--Stuart Steedman (talk) 08:04, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Personally, I think it's okay. I'm a fan of letting the players in the case speak for themselves. The only exception might be comments from people like Tselane Tambo; as she doesn't appear to have a Wikipedia article, I'm not sure her reaction is notable enough to deserve several sentences. I'm largely ignorant of SA politics, though--Zuma, Mandela, DeKlerk and Eugene Terreblanche are about the only politicians I can name--so I didn't want to make this change myself.
The other trick might be to start boiling down a few quotations to key words and phrases instead of complete sentences. "The ANC called the painting a 'big pile of poop', arguing that it existed only to 'mislead' the public." That makes it feel less newsy, I think. Khazar2 (talk) 08:13, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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